2007年5月17日 星期四

Compare and contrast living at home and in the dormitory---1st version

Living at home that who can to take care of me and prepare three meals.

I feel comfortable at home, but I not application to my homework.

I watching TV, movies, and playing computer uauslly.

On one can teach me that when I had help for homework at home. And I go to school late usually and spend a lot of time on traffic.




In the dormitory life that it will accord to school regulation, it has no free.

I have be use to a team live.

The advantages are: someone studying with me, someone can prompt me to go to school. In the dormitory life will be bored, it has not many amusement.

I have to wash my closes, prepare three meals myself. But, I can learning a team live and to be independent.

Above-mentioned are my reflections.

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Sean 提到...

"Living at home that who can to take care of me and prepare three meals." The "to" after can is unnecessary.

"I watching TV, movies, and playing computer uauslly." There is no verb in this sentence.

"On one can teach me that when I had help for homework at home." I don't get the meaning of this sentence.

And there are some mistakes in your chapter that I am not sure.

Finally I suggest that you can give some examples for the reader.

A9401010 Sean